MUBARAK ALI (Script writer)
Hat 2 :- Magic box.
A boy- went school- in street saw some problems- bagger bagging on- saw bad people - didn't do homework - teacher punishing him- teacher was scoding- he became upset-friends taunt him- in last period of school-after school - he sat in playground - climbed the tree🌲-
Found a dynamic box🌲- putted box in bag- came home with box- mother was asking about school - boy got ready for dinner-at night again didn't do school work 🌃- he was writing diary- he mentioned the box-
He checked the box- unrapped the box- did whatever he felt -helped baggers.
never control the box power - create problem-- leaved the box- on the tree.
It is good.
ReplyDeleteArea of improvement-
Grammar, Tense.
Please be clear.
Inciting incident-2
Rising action- 3
Climax-2
Resolution- 2